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I attempt to rest my head on my flat pillow
Welcoming a few hazy dreams.
But, how foolish am I, thinking it's possible,
When you're ripping my brain at the seams.

Nary a soft-spoken lullaby
Or a warm blanket could suffice.
For images of your caramel eyes
Are crushing me like a vice.

Do you analyze every word I speak?
Am I causing your heart to do flips?
Do you always become meek
Before feelings can escape your lips?

What does it mean when my cheeks are tinted rose?
When you brush my knee?
Every time you're a little too close,
Is it all because of me?

A cyclone of mystery enveloped me in fear
But didn't affect my hearing.
For there was a whisper I wasn't supposed to hear
During a hallway's clearing.

I let out a gasp and left for class
But not before I heard your reply
A "Shut up!" a little too fast
And a glance into my eyes.
This is a true story, but I'm less sure about the ending in real life :blush:
I mean, I did hear his friend whisper "You like her?"
And then he responded as recorded..."Shutup!" Really fast and then he looked at me and quickly looked away.
We're good friends and stuff, and he usually jokes around with me, and I've looked at those websites and stuff that say things like "If he invades your personal space, points his feet towards you, ext." HE DOES THAT. But I'm still not sure if he likes me and I don't want to ask and ruin our friendship and AUGH!
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Awe, I know how you feel. What I would say is depending how old you are tell him you like him. But if you not at the age for both of you to commit then don't you don't want to lose a friendship too early. When time passes and you are at a commitment age and you still like him and he shows signs that he likes you thats when you tell him. Honestly don't ruin a great friendship till you a certain of your feelings.

I hope I helped ^.^ BTW I loved the poem.
MrsTomlinson214 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you! :D
What do you think would be a commitment age?
Hm, I guess it depends on you. Me personally, don't want a boyfriend now because when your in high school, drama happens and the chances of a lasting are low. But it depends on both of you.
MrsTomlinson214 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Student Writer
Yeah, you're right. Thanks for the advice! :D
ChocolateStarfire Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I still get that feeling sometimes :3 It's hard to just stay friends with those you admire a lot...but sometimes you have to, if you want to keep the friendship afloat. Other times, you get lucky and you wind up going out with that person...if you both feel the same way and are ready to do so.

Hoping it all works in your favor! <3
MrsTomlinson214 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you! :D I appreciate the advice
ChocolateStarfire Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem! :D
NoNamedFish Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012

Yeah, I know that feel.
MrsTomlinson214 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Writer
Aprilnevermore Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I still don't get the eyes thing :-)
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